थोड़ी पुरानी रचना है पर शायद अब भी सार्थक है. 15 अगस्त 1947- बापू लाल किले पर ध्वजारोहण नही कर रहे थे,दंगों से प्रभावित इलाकों में भारत के मूल्यों की रक्षा में लगे हुए थे. क्या आज सत्तर वर्ष बाद भी वे आदर्श सुरक्षित हैं?
नदारद!
नहीं पालता शिकवे-गिले पर
उस भोर गाँधी नहीं थे लाल किले पर।
गरजें गोले काश्मीरी रस्तों पर
बरछे बरसे दलितों के दस्तों पर
हाँ, हाँ आजादी कि गूँज सुनो
चिपका लो तिरंगे अपने अपने बस्तों पर
लेकिन याद रहे ,आजादी के तो फूल खिले पर,
उस भोर गाँधी नहीं थे लाल किले पर ।
जलसे जमे माँ के नारों पर
बंधे बेड़ियाँ उन्मुक्त विचारों पर
करो!करो! करो! तुम कुठाराघात
जन जन के अधिकारों पर
लो चढ गए हम शौर्य के टीले पर,
उस भोर गाँधी नहीं थे लाल किले पर ।
नाराज हो समाज पर
बाज की नजर ताज पर
मत झुक इतना, हे स्वतंत्र!
राज की आवाज पर,
नाज कर स्वराज पर
अब नहीं अकाज कर
मैं खड़ा पास ही
आज ही आगाज कर
मैं भारत हूँ ,नहीं पालता शिकवे-गिले पर,
उस भोर गाँधी नहीं थे लाल किले पर ।।
– वैभव
Bahut sundar ……wah
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shukriya
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मित्र अच्छा लिखते है आप। आपकी और कविताओ का इंतजार रहेगा।
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ji bilkul samay samay par rachnaye daalta rahunga
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Very beautiful poetry indeed. Liked it very much.
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thanks, keep visiting
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your poetry is always energising and resounding.
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thanks
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न गाँधी से ,न नेहरू से रखता हूँ इतफाक
मुझे भाते है, भगत सिंह और अशफाक
शास्त्री और पटेल सा हो समर्पण
तो महकता है कोई भी चमन ।
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Thanks for dropping by at my blog. Sorry I can’t read your work.
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And thanks for the follow 🙂
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Great!
Thanks for checking out my blog.
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thanks keep visiting
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Sure 🙂
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सुंदर कृति। पढ़कर आनंदित हुआ। धन्यवाद रचना के लिए। ऐसे ही सुंदर रचना लिखते रहे हमारे लिए Vaibhaw ji
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बहुत बहुत धन्यवाद भाई
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I loved it…..Hindi poetry is something which wins hearts….and patriotism adds onto it…. beautiful
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thanks keep visiting 😊
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Hi I have nominated you for Liebster blog Award . Check this here https://avdheshdadhich.wordpress.com/2017/06/13/liebster-blog-award/
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thanks for the nomination avdhesh ji
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Welcome 😀😀😀
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उस रोज गांधी नहीं थे लाल किले पर… एक गम्भीर विभय पर सार्थक कविता
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shukriyaa
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Well written…
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thanks😊
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Atti Uttam… ❤☝👌🙌🙏👍
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shukriya sunil aate rahiyega
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Atyant prabhawshali 🙂 mann prasann kar diya mitr 🙂
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shukriya dost aate rahiyega blog par
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neki aur pooch pooch! 🙂
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बहुत दिनों बाद गाँधीवाद पर कविता पढ़ा
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ummid hai oasand aayi
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बहुत अच्छी रचना👌👌👍
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dhanyawaad
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धन्यवाद
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Wow!After reading your poem ,I have become your fan 🤗. Autograph please.Love it ❤.Thanks for following my blog.Amazing collection of poems .I would like to nominate you for Blue Tag Award.
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dhanyawaad madam itni bhari tarref ke liye😊 yeh aapka badaapan hai
phir se shukriya☺☺
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Badappan , hhahaha mh itni badi nhi hu Vaibhav ji ,I’m young like you😎
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hahaha😊😊
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😂😂
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Hey,I have nominated you for Blue Sky Tag Blog Award .Congrats and check my post👍
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Bahut badhiya .☺👌
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shukriya bhaiyaa
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Bahut sundar ☺👌👍
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very nice vaibhaw!
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thanks dost
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Sorry, i not understand about your article, i have three question for you, the first, what topic your article? Second, what your name? And the last where do you live? Thanks for your visited my blog and follow blog me, i hope you always healthy and nice day in your live..
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Nice to meet you!
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ना जाने कौनसी, दौलत हैं..!
कुछ दोस्तों के ,लफ़्जों में..!
बात करते है तो.!
दिल ही खरीद लेते हैं ..!
—- एक “नदारद” चाहनेवाला
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bahut khoob bhai
aate rahiyega blog par
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अवश्य
कुछ लोगों को शिकायत होती है कि
गुलाब में कांटे होते हैं,
मैं शुक्रगुज़ार हूं कि कांटों को गुलाब
का साथ मिला है…..
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poora andaaz hi shayrana hai aapka
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गजब की जिंदगी होती है शायरी लिखना….. खुद के खंजर से खुद की खुदाई करना ….
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Wonderfully written Vaibhaw….shabdon ka selection kamaal hai….
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bahut bahut dhanyawaad
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kya bat a ji
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Hi my friend, how are you? Thank you for following my blog…
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Bahut hi acha likha hai sir! Bilkul saarthak! ghazab
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That’s so amazing Vaibhav…really loved it…Keep it up buddy!! 🙂
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thanks friend
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Your most welcome buddy
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वाह लाजवाब
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shukriya manisha ji
aate rahiyega blog par😊
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Khoob sundar rachna….
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shukriya ananya ji
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वाह भाई! कमाल लिखते है आप।👌
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I wish i could read Hindi
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Loved it.. 👌👌
Matlab.. Bahot time baad kuch aisa padha.. Kuch alag sa.. 🙌🙌👏👏
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शुक्रिया दोस्त, आते रहिएगा ब्लाॅग पर😊😊
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Bilkul bhai
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khushi hui.. aapke soch ko padkrr.. shukriya shikhaane ke liye.
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आभारी हूँ आपके शब्दों का
आते रहिएगा ब्लाॅग पर
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Hi Vaibhaw, I have nominated you for Unique Blogger Award. Please check it here:
https://gauravsk98.wordpress.com/2017/07/29/unique-blogger-award/
🙂
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अनोखी रचना..कई लेख और किताबें पढ़ी हैं गाँधी जी के 15 अगस्त को दिल्ली में न होकर नोआखली जैसी जगहों पर होने के, लेकिन कविता कभी नहीं..खूबसूरती से बयाँ की है आपने बात.
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